Anamatic Review P1

Amy Brown's review of my Anamatic.

The Narrative doesn't really make sense as the voice for the characters changes through out the sequence making it to confusing to understand. It is not easy to see where the SFX fits in, from watching the sequence i am not completely sure where about the special FX takes place and also what they are. The dialogue is not very engaging and quite dry and is isn't very enthusiastic and need more enthusiasm added it to the speech of the actors. Many of he shots at the begging of the clips are quite long and boring to follow. I think there need to be more shots added into the beginning to make it more interesting. There sequence could be improved by adding more shots and make sure that the characters keep the same voices through out the sequence. By using more movement in to Anamatic it would much improve the the technical quality of whole Anamtic sequence.