Friday 8 November 2013

Story pitch P1

Hero

Three main characters, Tom, James, Leo. Three good friends who are just living there average, normal lives. Tom is the shy one who got bullied and very insecure about himself because he is always in the eyes of the bullies. Tom is the main character. Leo is the dumb one and always gets himself into trouble  . James is the popular guy at college, he is the one who they look up to. 

They are all walking to a party and they see a blue light coming from a drain of the side of the road, Tom reaches into the drain to grab the crystal and they all touch it at the same time and then there is a flash and they all wake up in their own bed in the morning and can't remember what happened accept that they were walking to the party. 

They then realise that they have powers by the stuff they do in the morning like opening the door the handle gets crush or the door come off the hinges. they all ring and speak to each other and decide that they are no going to tell anyone about it. They go to college and Tom is on his own when a group of bullies approach him and and take his bag and start bullying him, he then defends himself and pushes one of them against the locker and realise that he has changed some how and this is when he begins to use his powers for evil. He discovers more off his powers and start committing crimes buy using his invisibility and his super speed and strength. Leo and James hear about some person that has been robbing places and causing crimes and that they have some special ability and then Leo and James clocks on to it being Tom. 

Leo and James speak to Tom and confronts him about what has been going on.

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